by greenmountaineer
of your work, the more I enjoy. You have a gift for storytelling and I liked this part-
Caught in the act
It was all so lewd,
Learning our isms:
Communism,
Fascism, Nihilism,
And, of course,
Their schisms.
as well as the ref to the pronunciation of <i>aluminum</i>...excellent first poem to read this day.
:)
of course with any poem over ten lines I can find something I don't like, but i'll keep it to myself today.