the rain

byLesseloovesPeter©

the rain
was cold
as we ran through the storm
laughing

your lips
were warm
as they pressed against mine
passionately

the house
was dark
as we sneaked up to your room
quietly

my clothes
were wet
as they fell into a heap
on the floor

your eyes
were flashing
as I pulled you into me
fully

the silence
was broken
as I screamed your name
into the night

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by LesseloovesPeter09/20/13

OldBear-there's this thought in modern poety that it's all about the imagery and pretty words that paint it. My intention here was to try, with very basic words and very limited imagery, to show that amore...

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by tazz31709/20/13

WATCH THE RHYTHM OF THE RAIN

adjust the patterns as you will, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Oldbear6309/20/13

Wow

Rhythm is perfect for the content, the content was almost visual if you know what I mean. Exciting. From a memory?

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