All Comments on 'The Salad Bar Gunslinger'

of a Waffle shop in DC I used to go to which was owned and run by ex-cons. An almost palpable sense of danger permeated the place.

Thanks for bringing back those memories.

is there no end to your talent?

this line floored me:

"The young blond with gams that

reach for the sky"

How can somebody take a line like that (so tired) and work it in so well, so it becomes fresh in the context. Damn, a master! Remind me never to have a shoot-out with you. I'll surely lose.

didn't get an "E"?

one of the best things I've read in a long time

Please, keep it up

Thank you