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by pelegrino

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
Interesting

you are pulling people off the page for the picture to form, always a danger in that.

these two lines would have to explained away:

In sinful passion as I stood,

Where angels fear to tread it.

otherwise mere cliche

5ed, never the less

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