by Oldbear63
Very entertaining. The poem is atmospheric and mysterious then cracked me up at the end. Great fun!
Very eerie, catches completely the mood you want to create.
I liked all images you give, crows flying uneasy, horses frozen etc, also the references to magic number 7.
And finally the abrupt" non end" is a masterstroke.
I hope you are well and had a nice Halloween.
5ed.