by Curiouswife
Title grabbed me! Last strophe is very good, even blows the rest of the poem away.
You really make the reader feel the scene, and feel what you feel here. There is a palpable sense of having been seduced. Really nicely done.
It's more than just the idea of an older woman --- it's showing the conflicts the older woman may have at being the older woman.
At my age, seducing a twentysomething feels like it might be fun sport ... now if only............. Terrie
tinkering around in my head..enjoyed the images...blue
I agree with Eve on that last stanza. The description is very texturized and easy to see. Excellent show.
At my age I can easily seduce men in their mid-30's without their knowing I've a dozen years on them .. all that exercise is like a fountain of youth and they are so ... YUM!!!
At my age, most of the men that can satisfy me are waaaay too young - not that I'm complaining. Patricia