All Comments on 'The Taste of Us'

by Havocman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice!

I liked this.....I felt and tasted the sweet sexiness of loving with you.

Naughtily_WrittenNaughtily_Writtenover 11 years ago
Love the way this was written

Very stimulating to the senses.

case28case28about 11 years ago

Nice intensity and great rhythm.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice

Most of this "poetry" on this website focuses more on smut than beauty. Your poem truly evoked the beauty of a real passionate experience, that most poets here skip over in place of details. Beautiful

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
IS IT SWEETER THAN WINE OR HONEY

and does it leave an after taste, TK U MLJ LV NV

BruizednBroken55BruizednBroken55about 7 years ago
Brilliant!

I love this. It is a brilliant piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work. :)

ShurwoodForest0609ShurwoodForest0609about 4 years ago
Perfect!!!

You nailed it!!! Every word perfect. You told the whole story in just this short poem. Best one in my opinion, which might not mean much. But I have read many poems & stories & written quite a few myself. Anyhow, this one is definitely a winner 🏆 And written very well. You know what is being meant every word you read. I absolutely Love it 💞

ChessguyDonChessguyDonalmost 4 years ago
Amazing.....

Absolutely amazing!!!!!

Sman4444Sman4444over 1 year ago

Perfect poem! Captures so much in so few words! Truly captures the. experience of the taste!

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