by Havocman
I liked this.....I felt and tasted the sweet sexiness of loving with you.
Most of this "poetry" on this website focuses more on smut than beauty. Your poem truly evoked the beauty of a real passionate experience, that most poets here skip over in place of details. Beautiful
and does it leave an after taste, TK U MLJ LV NV
I love this. It is a brilliant piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work. :)
You nailed it!!! Every word perfect. You told the whole story in just this short poem. Best one in my opinion, which might not mean much. But I have read many poems & stories & written quite a few myself. Anyhow, this one is definitely a winner 🏆 And written very well. You know what is being meant every word you read. I absolutely Love it 💞
Perfect poem! Captures so much in so few words! Truly captures the. experience of the taste!