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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Blushing Sack... thank you so much for this beautiful poem.

du lac~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A nice write for Du; love the imagery.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Exquisite.

What a lovely way of referring to a couple: I loved this stanza:

One last look-

two birds in formation

their hearts beating together

as one

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