All Comments on 'The Trouble with Rhythm'

by jd4george

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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
No trouble getting this one

Excellent use of metaphor, JD4G! Wonderful poem.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
witty~

I truely enjoyed this poem~

clever write and insightful

zen master of pen~

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