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by Pandoras Desire

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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I did a look back at pieces you wrote a couple years ago and this shows a huge amount of improvement; it flows so much better with the improved line breaks; keep it up!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
the woman...

I liked the way the poem flowed, literally (~_~) nice write.

oregon_galoregon_galabout 17 years ago
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lines....wonderful!

Pandoras DesirePandoras Desireabout 17 years agoAuthor
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Thanks everyone for the coments.

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