by steve porter
and the way Steve says it--it's so insightful, and a very positive take on a subject some would moralize over. This strophe:
we slip in and out no one the wiser
but then again are we not
because somehow i feel enlightened.
confused me--I think it's the double negative and feeling like there's something missing after "not." Maybe it's me. :-) Still a great poem though!
After my coffee and several days of relatives, I am coming BACK to read this one again. I like it and I have to figure out exactly why--- Thanks Steve!