All Comments on 'Their Old House'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A touching recollection of youth and innocence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I feel that

way about my parent's old house on the lake. My dad passed away a few years ago and I drove by the house a year or so ago. It was strange not seeing him step out of his work shop or hear his voice yelling out to me. Thanks Sack. that was a beautiful piece of art you created that will mean a lot to a lot of people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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you have been mentioned on today's review

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
these two lines...

Didn't I swing with delight

on that rusty pole?

that leaves plenty of imagination, but you definitely can reflect to the past with nice imagery.......don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I'll have to agree with don. Definitely, good poetry! I liked that image.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Time...

Time flowing like a river. Our youth to never end. Yet end it does ~ leaving us with those bittersweet memories. I loved this poem.

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