All Comments on 'Theory of the Damned'

with Tess--confused, confusing

It's hard to know what is happening here. Maybe this is Gorean and/or goth stuff that I don't get. It seems like it is rife with errors but there is clearly intelligence behind it and also clear that much time went into writing it. It is dark. I think the writer has lots of talent it just doesn't show up in this piece.