All Comments on 'These Tears'

by OralFixxxation

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Such pain

I want to take you in my arms and hold you there forever. You write with the eloquence of a swan and the beauty of a sunrise. You have the kind of pain that only a true writer knows. I appreciate you, Oral. You are lovely.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Oh My !!

Emotion in buckets. Love and pain, one coin two sides. Such tenderness here, and pain ... Hugs my friend. Nice pen filled with your heart and saved within your soul ~

More Plaese ~

damppantiesdamppantiesabout 18 years ago
Beautiful words

Simple words and lots of feeling, that's all I need to appreciate poetry. This poem touched something in me, and that's the highest praise I can give you. Great writing.

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 18 years ago
Very Moving

Very moving. I have sat here for ten minutes trying to think of words that are adequate for what you have written here.

You really moved me with this one...incredible piece of writing!

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