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I'm the author of this poem. Literotica doesn't give enough space for long titles. It was supposed to be:

"things to do on sunday when your lover is too busy for you"

Anyway, please vote! This is my first published poem and I'd love to hear your comments.

;-)

...creative way of telling a story. Hope to read more from you!

your poem is wonderful--it tells a story and keeps me right there in the emotion of that "other woman." thanks for sharing it. wish you'd write more.