All Comments on 'Those Moments...'

Eyes capturing eyes

from across the room.

Looking away...

only

to look again.

Really liked that bit,

nice poem, I enjoyed

the read.

Thanks.

~ Jenn

very soft and sweet and subtle... I enjoyed myself but I think it went on a little bit too long, consider that you are writing about moments, maybe trim it down a bit.

by the way, love your nickname, it is classic. Welcome

(I think! Sometimes people slip through and it takes me a while to find them swimmin in this huge lit sea)

~annaswirls