All Comments on 'Those Who Wear My Name'

Well, its kinda charmingly disarming<br>

to open my heart<br>

to the melancholy message<br>

of life as a melancholy man<br>

surrounded by people he can love<br>

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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I read your poem because I like your work. I got to the fifth stanza and it all started to work out for me. :) Really like the second half of the poem.

I didn't even notice - thee mark of a good poet, no excellent poet, to say nothing and make it interesting, hey didn't Seinfeld make a carreer out of it, you didn't want a detailed critique did you?