All Comments on 'Through The Eyes Of A Child'

stuff fawnie.

Some nice images and words choices

: )

Thank you

....hard work pays off. So, so much better than where you started.

it is just a nightmare, sounds all too real to me. I especially liked this phrase-

beside a cauldron of curses, language

insane.

this is really good fawnie, you are growing in leaps and bounds :)

very raw and vivid?great phrasing and word choices. Well done fawnie.

and sadness. The sense of isolation and helplessness is frightening.Moving and disturbing.