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sacksackover 19 years ago
Another wonderful poem....

"outsider in, insider out" is my favorite line! The only rhyme that is a little awkward is the one with "eludes" because of the plural...otherwise, this poem flows smoothly. It appears to come from a period where you were doing many rhyming poems. (PS- that's a good idea...to date your poems!)

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