All Comments on 'Tired'

This is a wonderful read. I sense there's a big story behind the poem, which whets the reader's appetite for more. You have a really fluid, precise way of writing--the words flow so well. I hope to see more of your poems here.

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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I really enjoyed this poem. Sounds like you worked through your dreams and came at the other end , ready for...some more dreams, this time with a hopeful attitude. BTW, no problem with finding the words to make it sound less trite, none whatsoever.