All Comments on 'Tis a curious thing...'

1) cut out the ellipses

they distract the reader and don't help the rhythm and structure of the poem

2) cut its length

this is too long

3) slash and burn

there isn't much worth saving from this mess of a poem. save any images that help tell the poem and ditch the rest.

Then shape it into something legible

A mass of images without any foundations = will fall down

Awesome. . . .realistic . . . . i could really visualise what the writer was saying