- Erotic Poetry
- To Borrow a Supernova
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Click hereAs if wine,
crisp when you wore that smile,
would dull the splendour.
Tender tendrils,
half past one and counting
every second you were more
than breath and arms away,
rolled from my mind,
to catch you,
you knew how,
caress you blind,
and make you mine.
As if wine,
I drank the sight.
As if time,
stretching out before us
could evade the clash
of you and I,
a gorgeous crash
of sweat, song,
scream and sigh.
As if time
could pass us by,
a faint hope cast aside,
we filled the night.
As if gold,
could never shine that bright,
I traced a finger,
lingered on a starlit patch,
the destination
of a milky way glow,
six hundred lightyears old,
and realised...
...a sun gave up her life
for me to revel in your skin
and see that sight,
the almost hidden jolts
of tranquil heartbeats
deep within.
As if gold,
I bathed in you.
- COMMENTS
Honey123almost 20 years agoYour words are like a serenade ~ they sing beauty into my heart and mind. This is an extremely romantic poem. I love it.
*Honey
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoI read Songbird and came to read more. I'm takin' off my coat and stayin' a while. Damn, man, you can write.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoL, I happened to see this in your sig line. It's really good, unique rhythm to it. Form and content combined exquisitely. I rarely reread a poem here, this one is getting printed. Perdita
minsuealmost 20 years agoThat's it. I have GOT to get better about reading the new poems regularly.
Still your groupie ;)
YDDabout 20 years agoA modern love poem,
very well done.
Great image concept that only a modern writer could explore and use:
"...a sun gave up her life
for me to revel in your skin
and see that sight,
the almost hidden jolts
of tranquil heartbeats
deep within."
A must read.
Anonymousabout 20 years agoThat was NOT supposed to be a 50 on my last comment it was supposed to be a 100... please ignore the thermo in the last message. *wanders off mumbling*
Anonymousabout 20 years agoyou already saw in the poems thread.... but I still wanted to thank you again for writing this.
I love this line
I bathed in you.
Always, E
bluerainsabout 20 years agothe last line is the kicker....really a kool...pen...***** bluerain*****
