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Click hereMadame Tracy's voice is grim,
"The Johns have left,
probably, never to return again.
Cheating after collecting hints at theft
historically incommensurate as when
all women belonged to tribal denizens
who nover sold a spread for half an hour.
(nor paid taxes as formal citizens).
Desire's a nomad blind to border-wire
and brothel keepers. Unruly sex is the rule.
Fucking works when hunger seems most keen,
which strikes you girls as dismissive gruel.
You chafed full-titted at your dull routine.
Did a flagging sense of boredom stir their flight?
Wealthy Johns don’t simply vanish overnight.
I think there's a good poem here trying to get out. The semi-form is a problem, for one thing. The rhyme scheme seems a bit haphazard at times and several of the end words seem forced to fit a desired rhyme. I think it would be a stronger poem in free verse, but that's just my opinion.
Where's the closing quote?
Not bad, though. Far more interesting than most of what we see here.
There a good poem here but you have a penchant for spoiling it by wanting to be seen as a clever intellectual. Never complicate, always simplify.