All Comments on 'to wake'

I love poetry that focuses on just a moment. Nicely done.

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

Thanks for the journey~

it was Me waking up to that reveal of love's appreciation. So much was expressed in so few words here, Remec. The "less is more" really worked in the composition of this piece. Thank you.

Vixxx

Captures such intimacy in so few words. Very nice!

Short but sweet, all the right things rolled into a perfect little package.

to watch my lover still asleep. Very nicely captured. :)