All Comments on 'To Write a Poem'

The poet travels, not always linear, but in spaces at times confined, and sometimes beyond confinement. You are the poet beyond even your words, yet controlling them perfectly from a depth of purpose, precision and passion.

Music: the eternal, dancing on a page in rhythm, in beat, washing and expressing, taking the time, formless, expressing beyond what the linear'ity' of time is and yet -

to pull youself apart quickly, lay bare the shadows within, weaving it to the/ your soul - NEVER MINOR.

Beautiful - intelligent - passionate - intense - the meaning of not simply poetry, but of all writing with a poetic voice - intense - dichotimic between the words, the being and the edit.

Perfect.

T.O. LOL - you get it.

dangerous, explosive and that much more. Very good.

jim : )

good ole Senna IS still around! ;)

I, for one, am so utterly happy that you submitted this one.

*HUGS*

- Mindy

You need to post more poetry. :)

By the way, thank you for doing something original with "soul".

He knows to write is to wrap his soul

in a body of explosives, Al Qaeda-style

I read it, twisted my head and read it again, then gave ya a grin. (~_*)