- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Together
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Author's Note; The old concept of what could be. Of what if's, should have's and could have's.
When days are dark and friends are few
Remember I'll always stand by you
No matter the reason or time of day
Don't forget to come my way
Together I feel we could put things right
No longer alone we have to fight
My heart is always open to you
Bear in mind that I mean this too
Your friend and lover I long to be
Together our eyes will open to see
The path away from sorrow and
Together we can learn to love again
- COMMENTS
erectus123about 11 years agothat so ofter people use bare, which means to expose. But using it as first word with capital brings the noun (as in grizzly bear) to mind and distracts from the poem's message. There is a bit of the "roses are red" school here that takes away. I would suggest, forget rhyme when message is more important and get that clear first for a stronger work. Also drop authors note, it distracts.Should only be used to wxplain hidden info. Better to add comment after poem is posted. Just a suggestion.
