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Click hereTomorrow I will be with my poems.
They called me last night
and promised they would be here.
We will have a grand reunion.
We will celebrate under the stars
with sausage and biscuits and beer.
There will be laughter and tears.
I may get drunk and confess
that it was all my fault.
And you will be laced in grace,
but you will leave a mark wet and
full of the taste of teasing salt.
I like the end rhyme. It made me feel your rhythm without being too forceful
Are your poems all written for just one person and is that person coming? Thats what I got... Thanks
...if you moved the first line to the end of the poem, adjusting the line breaks to keep the same verse form?
I ask, because the way it stands right now, the poem didn't seem to "earn" the title. I would also add a comma to the title, right after "Tomorrow"... making the reader pause.