All Comments on 'Tomorrow I will be with my poems'

...if you moved the first line to the end of the poem, adjusting the line breaks to keep the same verse form?

I ask, because the way it stands right now, the poem didn't seem to "earn" the title. I would also add a comma to the title, right after "Tomorrow"... making the reader pause.

Are your poems all written for just one person and is that person coming? Thats what I got... Thanks

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

I like the end rhyme. It made me feel your rhythm without being too forceful

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