All Comments on 'Triolet, "Sweet Nectar"'

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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
"Between her legs I tasted nectar ..."

oozing so sweet and fluidic... yummy

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Triolet

This poet's beautiful triolet gives you the feeling of being pleasantly impacted with the triolet's required repeated lines.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
sweet nector

a tasty lil write (~_~)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

SET does the triolet so well,

It must be part of her psyche;

Even when writing other type poems

You can sense the pattern trying to break out.

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