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Click hereI find the comments concerning abstraction interesting. I almost didn't post this one because to me it lacks abstraction and is almost too direct and personal, too revealing. I've withheld it from other venues because it would immediately disclose too much. Maybe I see the piece too clearly and needn't worry that it is excessively exhibitionistic. Interesting feedback.
Too abstract for my liking and the centring thing is not working for this poem.
1. why centered?
2. why so abstract?
Seems to be trying to say something, but what could it be?
I probably gave it a 5, for it's spoof like qualities.