All Comments on 'T's Favorite Part'

by Willow Rain

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 18 years ago
Hot ...

Yes, hot, sexy, and a lil tease. You shall pull him in my friend. Love your bait, hooked up a jig nice and right you have. Wonderfullll imagery, word play and flow. Will have to come back and read this one again. I love this kind of poem ~

More Please, for it is def. a keeper ~~!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
T is for Tempting

I like this part the best:

"...the tiny fingertip touch of sandalwood oil that I have hidden

on the inside of my left ankle

for you to find."

Thank you.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
T's

a 'gemstone' of a poem!

So I slide my black ink pen

across the paper

lining up letters against

a crisp blue base line

in my composition notebook.

I have been willow'd (~_~)

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 18 years ago
too much

good in this poem to just pick one favorite line or phrase. I have truly enjoyed reading your work and hope you continue to post here.

excellent poem, loved the sensory tickles and touches you have sprinkled onto the pages :)

nj

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