All Comments on 'Tunnel'

A few lines in this poem are excellent: No pile of damp nerves/shows like fresh earth/overturned on my skull,/But just rap on the bone/and you'll hear the hollow,/that round, empty echo inside.

I love that you added words like earth and bone and hollow. Good word choices that set the mood of the poem.

This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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