by Sinsualmind
...is good stuff, and you are certainly a fine addition here. Keep posting!
Definitely not cool. Beautifully phrased, wonderfully explicit, scorchingly hot! Great work, sinsualmind!
Thanks Tara and Flyguy! Your words are humbling and I truly appreciate the feedback :)
..raging boner, Batman!
I really liked the rhythm of this.
And how you said he put his tongue in your ass, because it's just this side of dirty and always makes me grin.
I'd like to read more of these.
~D.A.
no holding back in this one. very sexual and very intelligent at the same time. Great F'ing poem.