All Comments on 'Two Bucks and A Ticket to Hell'

Zen fury - explain

I like the title with the last line, but it has a tendency to take the mind elsewhere

Good

"funkadelic sofas,

the unspoken gigolo,"

These are getting better with more story.

well, I had fun reading this. Thank you for that. :)

and i love the abu ghraib in america. that is a great dig......nicely done.......don

really enjoyed this piece,

well written and fun.

thanks.

~ J