All Comments on 'two hands free'

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oxalisoxalisabout 20 years ago
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this is a very interesting poem that takes the reader places.

are you taking us for a ride, SR?

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
I feel younger....

It's early Sat. morning and this poem is my cup of coffee.

It's spring, youth, caffee, pinch on the butt, its every-

thing I need to get today started. Thanks

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
conjured some

nice images.

and I love the rhythm.

very nice work...again

: )

Thank you

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
maybe I'm dense...

but what string and what wire?

It was great up to that phrase then you totally lost me and I read it 5 times...maybe I will try agan later, but overall some good descriptions and intriguing use of hands,,,driving with your knee? my daughter does that, I dont expect she'll have a license much longer if she keeps it up ;)

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Oh my...

some autoerotica here. Sexy (non-erotic) erotic poem here, driving with your knees. very good...

jim : )

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