by SeattleRain
this is a very interesting poem that takes the reader places.
are you taking us for a ride, SR?
It's early Sat. morning and this poem is my cup of coffee.
It's spring, youth, caffee, pinch on the butt, its every-
thing I need to get today started. Thanks
nice images.
and I love the rhythm.
very nice work...again
: )
Thank you
but what string and what wire?
It was great up to that phrase then you totally lost me and I read it 5 times...maybe I will try agan later, but overall some good descriptions and intriguing use of hands,,,driving with your knee? my daughter does that, I dont expect she'll have a license much longer if she keeps it up ;)
some autoerotica here. Sexy (non-erotic) erotic poem here, driving with your knees. very good...
jim : )