All Comments on 'Two Hearts, One Love'

by Unbridled_Passion

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
tightly woven

images makes this glide off the page...blue

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Together...

So well describes the coming together of two lovers with all the sensuous images guiding the Reader. Beautiful!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
one love....

erotic and touching... touching an erotic heart <grin (~_~) when two become one > nice write!

Velvet_PollyVelvet_Pollyover 17 years ago
a list does not a poem make

and this is not even a fresh list. just awful. sorry. you can do better and I hope to see it! you need to step back from those who kiss everything posted here with a perfect 5 and 100.TRY

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Enduring

All the little sights, sounds and feeling that go to making love in that warm intimate fashion

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Two lovers.

Coming together and creating sensual bliss..

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 17 years ago
Very erotic

Loved the sensuous images.

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