All Comments on 'Two Unprotected Hearts'

I'd been writing a similar peom - so you caught a real nerve.

Spot on hope to read more.

Very positive and upbeat about love. A broken heart? Oh that; it's not important, it'll heal. But love'll always be out there.

beautiful poem...thanks.

I read all your poems and they are all good but this one I liked the best, you really touched on just how I am feeling right now. And thank you for your comment on my latest poem, most appreciated :)

cheers, Marie

Does there come a point when the heart....the mind...can no longer see love......the words are there....the actions are there....but....is love still in there....is love still the notion it was when we were young in experience....was love always desire....were we unable to identify the source of the emotions....does time and experience dull life's edge....life's wonder and the lust for life....I don't think so but it can produce individuals that are very different than they once were....for my 2cents worth....don't give up on the love of life, love of experience, love of people that your writing shows you have...

I am stunned, it's like you are reading my mind. I have been trying to draft a similar poem for the love of my life. A love that I can not have ... and you have so totally captured my deepest and most sincere thoughts. Thank you for letting me know I'm not alone.