All Comments on 'Un'

I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review Thread in the Poetry Forum.

wildsweetone

couldn't resist that one... nice flow here. The end of the first stanza seemed a little...convoluted? But still a deeper read than it appears at a single glance. Well done, as usual.

Undying in it's form and undeniably artistic in it's feel. This poem hits hard to the core of the very being of all who read it. I detect such sadness and torment from the writer but always with just a hint of hope...awesome write.