All Comments on 'Unbelievable'

like the way you desribed both choices!!!

...love this description of it. So poignantly true! ~Minx

Whoa! Another excellent poem! First, I was singing Madonna (she has a song called "Like a virgin") then BAM! "I should've know better." Great lines! I definitely was drawn in to this. Good work!

You couldn't have said it any better! Words that strangle my heart!

~Honey

short, sweet and to the point...a little powderkeg.

Been there!!

Proves that our first time doesn't always meet our expectations and leaves us instead with regret.

and the sentiment rocks. I believe this could be even better with some changes in punctuation. Nice work, LadyJeanne. I look forward to more from you.