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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nice one, the joy of giving and receiving, i.e chapter 69

There is only one "humanity" as far as I know so it should be "humanity's", a possessive.

You might google "possessives rules" to re-familiarise yourself

The word humanities refers to the study of different social sciences as in academic categories i.e. history, philosophy, political science etc.

Oh yes, the licking of one and another's sexual organs is common in most species for sanitary and as pre-coitus behavior

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks once again...

Once again I am honored that both you have taken time to read and provide comment on my submissions... Greatly appreciated!

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
You may be over egging the pudding

but I like your romantic approach to what can be in truth a very animalistic act

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