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All Comments on 'Undeceived'

by demure101

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ishtatishtatover 10 years ago
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Well written. It reads as well without the third verse, but not better - I'm just making the observation.

wakingDownwakingDownover 10 years ago

I like this, it has a feeling of melancholy that lingers that I enjoy very much.

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