- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Under My Skin
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Click hereUNDER MY SKIN
This tingling I feel
Every time I am with you
Is likely to not go away.
And when I look
Into those eyes,
I see a new beginning.
Take me by the hand,
Because I know your touch
Overcomes me.
I feel so much better,
It’s as if
You surround me
With feeling comfortable
As my walls fall.
Spin me around on the dance floor
In this world we call life,
So that I can
Come out of my skin.
Tell me tomorrow
Is anything but an ordinary day,
Because who likes
Complicated ways
That has no purpose.
Tattoo my heart
With your smile,
Because you leave
Seduction
Raging
Under my skin.
- COMMENTS
tungtied2ualmost 20 years agois a great theme. The twirling ball room image is effective. Try paring superfluous words to give the ones you leave more impact. The rhytm will also improve. Keep putting it out there.
