All Comments on 'Underneath The Rainy Skies'

Looks like another of your earlier pieces with a fine sing-song rhyming pattern. Again, in spots the rhythm stumbles a bit and would be helped by some careful editing. It also seems that you sharply change the meter mid-way through the poem. Would like to see you press yourself and work on some new pieces with less of a focus on rhyming and exercise your wonderful creativity with words and descriptions.