- Erotic Poetry
- Undress Me
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Click hereUndress me
in the eternity
of this midnight beach
I want to see
my little black dress
thrown aside on the sand
and feel your warm breath
probing slowly between my legs
as the summer breeze
filled with love
from that wide sea behind us
caresses each inch
of my ecstatic bare back
- COMMENTS
jjsharshawover 8 years agoBeautiful! Elegant! Sublime! both Undress Me and Gang Bang. 5 Stars!
Ashesh9almost 9 years agoof my ecstatic bare back .......
killer lines , Fiona : 5-ed !
todski28over 9 years agoI enjoyed the imagery and you have utilised some nice sounds
I think you could make "little black dress" a bit fresher, most things have been done before but that one is deep in the cliche woods.....
Also probing is harsh in sound and doesn't fit for myself as what breath would do, the rest is very sexy
Magnetronover 9 years agoThis is more than competantly written and bordering on the poetic, but the middle - "warm breath probing" - is just not translating well for me. Breath does little to conjure up the sensation of probing as would a tongue.
