All Comments on 'Unhealthy Affairs'

This is very solid, and there's not a damn thing wrong with it. I like the broad strokes, and the way it allows the reader to move around within the frame, without being too abstract. Good job.

<br>Ah ha sort of poem.<br>

One instantly recognizes the feeling.<br>

One has, after all, felt it from time to time,<br>

even if one hasn't quite articulated it so specifically.<br>

One is left to meditate.<br><br>

One so loves a poem that allows<br>

one to articulate one's self so readily. <br>

I like this. I want to know more but, in a way, I feel like I know the story.

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!