All Comments on 'used and abused'

i'd change "poor" maybe to "old or worn" because when written, "poor" brings to mind "not having money", when spoken "poor" infers sad or familiar which is what you mean. minor point but you have a nice series here with you anthropomorphication of common object into sexual surragates....

for Humour in Erotica !

types of poems the other day just for a giggle.

I re-read the poem and might suggest an alternate ending of

used and abused,

my shoes.

to tie the whole piece together.

I wanted to submit it as a series titled "It's a poem not a dick",

with any of these type to go under that category. however I haven't figured that out yet

Clever! I do like twists.

OK Todski

So you've got this fetish about shoes? And your telling us about giving them a good old pounding?

Well, I would not have suspected you of it but it takes all sorts. Still I am glad the sheep & kangas are getting a rest now.

The laws of unintended consequences right there, thanks you for the laugh!!!!!

Thats good to know