Vacuum

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vacuum

i stare deep into your glimmering grey eyes,

my sapphires tracing your every curve.

the pith of my heart flourishes within your aura,

allowing my psyche to mingle with yours.

i need to know everything about you.

i will drain you of your passion;

extract all of your feelings;

and deplete you of any sensations.

i will dry you out until you're nothing

but a shriveled, dead worm

on the scorching pavement.

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jthserrajthserraover 19 years ago
Damn...

perhaps a little overmodified on a line or two, but damn, the poem is powerful and riveting, the ending ravishing. Nicely done.

jim : )

sacksackover 19 years ago
the last two lines sucked me in....

brilliant, as usual!

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