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sacksackover 19 years ago
the last two lines sucked me in....

brilliant, as usual!

jthserrajthserraover 19 years ago
Damn...

perhaps a little overmodified on a line or two, but damn, the poem is powerful and riveting, the ending ravishing. Nicely done.

jim : )

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