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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
this poem has bite

It has inspired me to write my own vampire verse but I fear that it would... suck. Anyway, fangs for the great poem.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
by the way,

I forgot to add that I love this part:

don't you fucking dare stop!

not now, not yet!

don't worry, I just bit

my lip

too hard

I love your bitten lip humor and the title is clever.

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