All Comments on 'Venting the Capital'

"Middleagepoet knows me very well. Or at least he captured a feeling that I have far too often. Venting the Capital tells the story, quite illustrative and written with a wonderfully eloquent flow, I might add, of a brain freeze."

I liked the way the poem goes from "electricity of thought" to a "vaporous haze", and is brought back by "crystalline nothingness" to a "jolt of thought". Nice trip.

BTW: I don't believe I've ever seen the word combination before: "crystalline nothingness"

This takes two tired old words and makes something fresh and new, and serves you well in the transistion point.

Congrats.

...nice effort by a poet who is new to me. There is a lot here, handled with fine language, and this offers a promise of more quality verse to come.